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    Over the Wall Between Public and Private





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    Re: Over the Wall Between Public and Private

    Not a bad concept. If I were to do it however I think I would have shot from almost the exact same perspective and angle of the wall. That is, on each photo, the wall would be located in the exact same 1/4 inflection pt of the photo except swaping sides. The wall would also have the exact same diagonal angle.

    The conversion of one side to B&W.... hmmm, not sure if this works for me in this particular area. But it is a good idea (sort of like The Wizard of Oz, Kansas is B&W anad Oz is color). Perhaps if the angles were the same, it would work with me better.

    Anyways, again, nice idea.

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    Re: Over the Wall Between Public and Private

    The contrast is way too much for the B&W.
    I like the color better. Good concept and I have to agree with GB on improvements. I would like to see a bit more depth/height to the wall so you dont get that plank effect.

    Also, my eyes are really drawn to that sidewalk. It has a very interesting look with the moss going thru it like a river. I think that has the most interest in the photo, although I enjoy the concept you came up with.

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    Re: Over the Wall Between Public and Private

    Thanks guys

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