Outside the brickworks no.4

[Seb]

Comments are welcome

Seb

[julsoph]

Hey Seb, I like this. You have some cool repetition going on besides the obvious repeating supports...you have the circles in the supports themselves, and then even the wall/door at the end with the "x" mimicks the wall to the left. The bricks have a lot of texture to them also. Nice.

Emily

[gahspidy]

Yes, Seb, there are good repetitions going on here and some pleasing brick textures. I do not feel there is anything wrong with this, other than personally it leaves me wanting something more.
btw, I looked at your link the the LL and there was your shot, or the similair one you had composed. I don't remember seeing that window above in your shot though. Also, did you take a look at Clyde Butchers link? He is on eof my fav landscape photogs. Shoots large format, b&w.

[dbutler]

I'm a big fan of the repetition as well. My only thing is that huge window in the forefront at the top. I think I like it better when I scroll to crop that portion off. It leaves the brightest light at the end of the "tunnel". And the textures and colors seem to pop more for me that way.

[Seb]

Hello,

Emily: thank you for your sharp observations as usual. I didn't quite realized the double "x" thing! lol I did noticed however that my picture have a slight tilt that I will correct for the print.

Gary: thanks for commenting. I just looked at Clyde web site. I didn't knew that guy although I am quite sure that I have heard his name in the past. He clearly has remarkable b&w work. I'll visit his gallery one of these days. My picture did had the small window at the top as well. Srangely, there is some sort of grid in that window so they added it last year for some reasons.

Dbutler: thank you for your imput. Actually, I don't really the idea to loose the structure at the top but I do see your point with the window.

Seb