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    Out For a Stroll

    Hey all,
    New to the forum, and wanting to become a better photographer as well. Be nice, but any advice and reviews welcome. This was taken from a brige in Venice.
    Thanks!
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    Re: Out For a Stroll

    Welcome to PR. I like this but it does seem to be leaning some. The first thing I would do is straighten it. I would also like to see a color version. This is nice.
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    Re: Out For a Stroll

    Yea, it was tought to get the shot quick enough. There were actually a ton of other folks all around trying to get photos too, so I got caught leaning.
    Here's the photo volor without any editing...
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    Re: Out For a Stroll

    Quote Originally Posted by sry407
    Yea, it was tought to get the shot quick enough. There were actually a ton of other folks all around trying to get photos too, so I got caught leaning.
    Here's the photo volor without any editing...
    Very nice. I think the B/W conversion was a good idea - I like the luminous feel. In the BW there seems to be some vignetting that isn't apparent here in the original.

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    Re: Out For a Stroll

    I like the color shot,the lean is easily fixed.Considering the conditions you did very well. Welcome to PR.









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    Re: Out For a Stroll

    I like it. It drew my eye right down the canal to all of the little details at the end. Considering the quick shot, pretty good. Welcome.
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    Re: Out For a Stroll

    This is an excellent shot! Love the b&w conversion and the added vignetting. Needs a little bit of straightening but is perfect otherwise
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    Re: Out For a Stroll

    Quote Originally Posted by Xia_Ke
    This is an excellent shot! Love the b&w conversion and the added vignetting. Needs a little bit of straightening but is perfect otherwise
    Agree. Straighten the first one and it's good to go.

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