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    D80. 50mm 1.8, 17-55 2.8. SB 600. DLB1973's Avatar
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    Our Wedding Night!

    Snapped this of the wife as she was looking over the falls at the Salish Lodge. Snoqualmie Falls observatory in the background....


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    Re: Our Wedding Night!

    I've seen this before.
    Was it here or elsewhere? Don't see it in your gallery.

    I'm sure this has meaning for you but there is too much separation between your wife and what she's looking toward. If there were more dof it might be better.
    The lodge is so our of focus that without the tittle we wouldn't know what it was.
    The railing coming out of her chin is a problem too.
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    Re: Our Wedding Night!

    I am sure it has a lot of meaning for the both of you (congratulations BTW) but it mostly looks like a messy, dark blur.

    Still, the composition and placement of her in the frame does have potential. It just doesn't seem like it works here.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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