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    The other one...

    I know theres not a lot car enthusiasts here but at least the pics and photoshop are somewhat decent!








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    Re: The other one...

    BIG car enthusiast here.

    alright, first two pictures seem a little cluttered with those yellow poles. i think it would look pretty cool if you switched up the aperture and shutter speed so the yellow bars were out of focus and the car itself was much sharper because there doesnt seem to be much emphasis on the car

    3rd pic - a little bare, i think if you had done this picture horizontally, without the angle and moved more to the right so you get more of the side of the car plus the dumpster and loading platforms in the background that would've look cool

    4th pic - lol not a dodge fan, ford fan here! but good way to take up some of that unused space

    overall, pretty good!
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    Re: The other one...

    nice magnum.
    good ideas, but I would move the car more to the left cause the blacktop is taking away from it.
    maybe more of a profile shot so you can see the rims more

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    Re: The other one...

    I like the first but also would like to see it with larger aperture to blur foreground and background more.
    Second one is too cramped between rails
    In the third the car is too close to right and top frame. You could crop from left and bottom and it might not look so cramped in a vertical format.
    Love the photoshop work in the last one to fill that empty space but the car is stil too close to top and right side.
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    Re: The other one...

    The first one is the best for me. i like the use of the rails in the fg, i like that they are sharp as if I'm standing there looking out at the car. the car is framed in a roomy opening near the third upper right portion of the frame.
    The others have the car even higher in the frame which is hurting it, except for the second shot which has the car lower but too tightly sandwiched between the railings
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    Re: The other one...

    My critique on this one would be similar to my comments on the Mustang. Sorry for being so negative.
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    Re: The other one...

    My critique on this one would be similar to my comments on the Mustang. Sorry for being so negative.
    dont worry, thats how we learn
    as i certainly wouldnt call myself an expert much less and amateur
    one thing i have realized is how difficult car photography is
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    Re: The other one...

    Those are only a few of a series. These are some other examples.









    I posted those first since i considered them the most "artistic" LOL!!

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    Re: The other one...

    these work very well I like them

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