Photo Critique Forum

Please post no more than five images a day and respond to as many images as you post. Critics, please be constructive, specific, and nice! Moderated by gahspidy and mtbbrian.
Featured Photo
Photo by hminx

Photo by hminx
Featured Photo Archive >>
By posting on the Photo Critique forum you agree to post only your own photos, be respectful, and give back as much as you receive. This is a moderated forum and anything abusive or off-topic will be removed.
Results 1 to 12 of 12
  1. #1
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Mar 2004
    Location
    Apple Valley, Ca - USA
    Posts
    588

    Which one's better?

    These were taken in aperature priority mode, late moring in bright sunlight. I probably would've done it full manual as I've been practicing that a lot lately, at least on still subjects, but I was in a bit of a hurry.

    The top one was taken at 1/200, f8 and the bottom 1/160, f8. Both iso 64.
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails Which one's better?-dodge-whole-car-small.jpg   Which one's better?-dodge-whole-car2-small.jpg  

  2. #2
    Member
    Join Date
    Apr 2004
    Location
    florida
    Posts
    420
    i like the top picture better then the bottom one but i think its like sharpened to much or something, possibly taken on a bad camera i dont know y it looks like not clear the lines are not clear mabey cause it was so bright i think you did a little work in photoshop and thats y it looks like this, i dont know dude
    ~Something is nothing~
    ~Nothing is somthing~

  3. #3
    TJM
    TJM is offline
    Great Sage Equal of Heaven
    Join Date
    Nov 2001
    Location
    Australia
    Posts
    24
    To me the angle on the second pic is much more interesting. Id try and eliminate the shed on the left though its a bit distracting. The telephone lines and trees could work but as they are they distract you from the car rather than lead you to it. Other than that it seams to be waaaaay oversharpened as Young Shooter said
    Try re-shooting versions of the second shot its nearly a great photo in my oppinion

  4. #4
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Mar 2004
    Location
    Apple Valley, Ca - USA
    Posts
    588
    I'd like to reshoot but since then I've pulled the weeds. The car is still the same but I think the weeds add a lot to the mood of the picture.

    I don't know what to say about the resolution. That seems to happen to all my B&W pics when I shrink them down. I don't have photoshop or any decent photo editing program. the originals look great though...

  5. #5
    ...has no clue greg hxc's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2004
    Location
    seattle, wa
    Posts
    98
    I like the second one, agree on the shed and don't mind the phone lines.

    I can almost gaurantee you the "oversharpening" they are talking about is a result of shrinking the image down in a program that does little or no resampling.

    You could try an app I use here at work (its free for personal use if I remember correctly) called Irfanview. It allows you to resize and print entire folders of images if you'd like. Doesn't size down nearly as well as Photoshop but it should do far better than this.

    http://www.irfanview.com/

  6. #6
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Mar 2004
    Location
    Apple Valley, Ca - USA
    Posts
    588

    That kicks ass!!!

    thanks a lot.. that program kicks ass, (for free anyway), and I could load it on my computer here at work w/o admin access!! Don't tell anyone!! thanks..

    Here's a better resized picture...
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails Which one's better?-dodge-whole-car2-small.jpg  

  7. #7
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Mar 2004
    Location
    Apple Valley, Ca - USA
    Posts
    588
    Hell, may as well repost the other pic too...
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails Which one's better?-dodge-whole-car-small.jpg  
    Last edited by Ultra Magnus; 05-06-2004 at 02:19 PM. Reason: oops, forgot pic

  8. #8
    ...has no clue greg hxc's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2004
    Location
    seattle, wa
    Posts
    98
    Press T while in Irfan to bring up a the thumbnail view and you can do all kind of great stuff (batch jobs, thumbnails, contact sheets, etc.).

    I know this is terrible, but I actually MISS some of the harshness of the original (minus the digital eyesores). A little bit of talented Photoshop work could help out the new "clean" images. I played with it a little but I hard time not blowing out the lighter areas (how I hate you, shed!).

    EDIT: went ahead and attached the best i got w/ PS. i hate posting mod's of others work w/o permission in advance so let me know if you want it gone. Don't particularly think this is a good edit but it gets the my idea across, bringing out some of the sharper edges and the roughed up texture of the car body.
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails Which one's better?-dodge-gam-change.jpg  
    Last edited by greg hxc; 05-06-2004 at 03:26 PM.

  9. #9
    Member
    Join Date
    Jun 2002
    Location
    H
    Posts
    129
    bmadau, those are nice shots. I really like the first one, especially after a correction.

    There are a few things that caught my eye; clear sky and short, hard shadows, definitely a sunny day.
    It's important to adjust the blacks and whites in such a manner that both leave enough details. On a sunny day like this you will always find some details in the blacks, because of all the reflecting sunlight. This is how it should look in my opinion (on a calibrated monitor):
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails Which one's better?-car.jpg  

  10. #10
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Mar 2004
    Location
    Apple Valley, Ca - USA
    Posts
    588
    I see what you both mean, and thanks a lot to everyone for all the help. I'm quickly learning that I need to pay closer and close attention to the smallest details. I see what you both mean about hte outline of the car being soft, and all the other stuff... I'll definately keep at it! Thanks again...

  11. #11
    ...has no clue greg hxc's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2004
    Location
    seattle, wa
    Posts
    98
    Excellent job Wings. Mine even looks dark on my overly bright flat panel I have here at work, hah.

  12. #12
    Member
    Join Date
    Jun 2002
    Location
    H
    Posts
    129
    Thanks Greg.

    If you want to calibrate your blacks & whites on your flat panel, try this site;

    http://pages.prodigy.net/ecmorris/tips/monitor.htm


Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •