Greg, this is a very cool old building. Lots of character. I agree with the above comments on the sky. One thing I would like to add is that I wouldn't have taken out the items at the top of the stairs on the left. I think they add to the overall feel. It stands out a bit in the edited version that something was taken out there. I think this would make a good black and white candidate and might be worth a revisit with the Canonet and a roll of the Ilford you ordered ;)

Aaron