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    This Old Door. . .

    I'm always excited to find an interesting door or window to take home with me, and hopefully this one worked out.
    What do you think?
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    Re: This Old Door. . .

    That is one beat up door. Nice contrast.
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    Re: This Old Door. . .

    I like it. Good contrast within tone.

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    Re: This Old Door. . .

    It's a lovely wreck with all those latches, hinges and diagonal braces. But what is best is that blank black hole that invites us to the other side.
    I like the pink hinges too and it looks like the painter did a sample area before applying the final colour to the ironmongery.
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    Re: This Old Door. . .

    I have to disagree with Tom. I love the door but the window looks PSed black. Some slight lighting or shadows would add a bit of mystery to what's inside.
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    Re: This Old Door. . .

    I do think it needs more contrast or change to b/w.
    Compositionally, I think it would benefit from a prop leaning beside the door. Shovel, rake, broom, etc.
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    Re: This Old Door. . .

    looks flat, over proccessed to me.
    artificial and digital come to mind.
    nice subject material and if theres a great photo in there im sure youll find it.
    you know i like youre work.

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    Re: This Old Door. . .

    my extreme appology gary just looked at my pic on this moniter and its way off so my comment to your door do not apply.

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    Re: This Old Door. . .

    I agree. I think that an old rusty shovel leaning next to the door would be very nice.

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    Re: This Old Door. . .

    I like the contrast and the crop. I agree that a rusty shovel would really set this image up.

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    Re: This Old Door. . .

    Hi Gary,
    The pic is well composed. The cross on the door is very 3-dimensional. I especially like the red square on the right as it complements with the dark square on the door. Well done!
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    Re: This Old Door. . .

    Thanks for all your great comments on this. I too like the pure black hole in the window, but understand how it may look too stark against the rest. It was not deepened black any and there is nothing in there to try to expose.
    I also agree that a shovel or rake,etc. would add to the shot by giving it some deeper dimension. Must make a note to have shovel and rake in the car with me when I go shooting. lol
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    Re: This Old Door. . .

    Must say I'm not up for this shovel business. I feel this is a sort of intimate shot of the door and it needs no props. Put a shovel there and it will look so obvious and "put there" for ever more. Just OB's thoughts.
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    Re: This Old Door. . .

    I'm with OB on this one .. a shovel would look set up imo. Now - what if one of the door panels was just slightly ajar?

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    Re: This Old Door. . .

    Quote Originally Posted by Overbeyond
    Must say I'm not up for this shovel business. I feel this is a sort of intimate shot of the door and it needs no props. Put a shovel there and it will look so obvious and "put there" for ever more. Just OB's thoughts.

    Yes, it probably would come over that way. I think Mike has the right idea in having one of the doors slightly open for more dimensional eye candy
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