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Thread: Oh, Waitress

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    Oh, Waitress

    Experimenting, as usual. This is one of those condiment bottles, which is somewhat clear. I placed it on a lightbox app and aligned the images of the figure to get a shadow effect.


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    Re: Oh, Waitress

    I like the photo, good composition and the "shadow" is perfect. I mainly would like to see it brighter, bringing it closer to white. It simply looks a little too dark. It doesn't pop as much as it could.
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    Re: Oh, Waitress

    I don't see a picture? Did you take it down?
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    Re: Oh, Waitress

    Great idea, I agree with dwaugh about the brightness but I wonder what this would look like if you had rotated the bottle slightly bringing the shadow and waitress more into line, this would also make it less tight on the edges.
    Pete

    Isn't it a cool thing in nature that the colours never seem to clash...

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