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Re: Odd Square in front of the Air Canada Building
First image is very nicely composed. I would try to run it through a photoshop warming filter or simply reduce the amount of purple/magenta in the image. What lens are you using though? There's some funky distortion/blurring in the corners. Try and crop that out a bit... and maybe a do a slight gaussian blur-- the image looks oversharpened.
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Re: Odd Square in front of the Air Canada Building
Originally Posted by fx101
First image is very nicely composed. I would try to run it through a photoshop warming filter or simply reduce the amount of purple/magenta in the image. What lens are you using though? There's some funky distortion/blurring in the corners. Try and crop that out a bit... and maybe a do a slight gaussian blur-- the image looks oversharpened.
I think that is Don's style
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Re: Odd Square in front of the Air Canada Building
Im going to try using my lap top for photos. It has a sharper monitor. I can't see these distortions with my CRT monitor. That may be the problem.
I'm using my .38 wicon. The lens isn't perfect but it gives me a 14 mm effect even though the edges get a little stretched and unsharp. It also vignettes in two or three corners.
Re: Odd Square in front of the Air Canada Building
Originally Posted by Don Schaeffer
Im going to try using my lap top for photos. It has a sharper monitor. I can't see these distortions with my CRT monitor. That may be the problem.
I'm using my .38 wicon. The lens isn't perfect but it gives me a 14 mm effect even though the edges get a little stretched and unsharp. It also vignettes in two or three corners.
Ah... I can see how the sharpening technique you use can be used purposefully for a certain style but I was pretty sure the distortions weren't purposeful . Try using the photoshop lens distortion tool unless DXOptics has a module for the wicon (which would be pretty neat). Crop a bit and the distortions will also be gone. Nice pics though.
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Re: Odd Square in front of the Air Canada Building
I don't use photoshop. I use a simpler program called photosuite. I can do manually what photoshop does automatically in most cases. I odn't want to crop out the edges of the photo--I'd rather have the unsharpness. I clone rather than crop the vignetting in the corners.