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Thread: October 30

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    Re: October 30

    I really like the first and lat pictures

    th ewoman in the lst pic is not to happy about her pic being taken ?

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    Re: October 30

    I don't like the second one.
    Background is too cluttered. Note the tower growing out of the middle lady's head and part of the foot of one on left is missing..
    The first, third, and fourth I think are very good street shots.
    The backgrounds tell part of the story, no body parts leading off frame, good use of rule of thirds with uncentered subjects.
    The 'no smoking' signs in front and back of the last one really add a point of interest, though I wish the one in front of her wasn't partially on her face.
    I would like your permission to post an edit on the first which I did a b/w conversion on.
    The b/w on the last two adds to the grittiness of the situations though some more editing could really bring them out.
    I'm slowly getting better at b/w convesion but many here are much better than I.
    Good stuff, Don!
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    Re: October 30

    Thanks. I don't think they knew I was shooting.

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    Re: October 30

    I like the fourth best. With a little more sharpness, #1 would have been my favorite.
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    Re: October 30

    Thanks Paula

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