Ocean

[realworld]

This is a photo of my sister at the ocean...I would love any feedback :-)

[Old Timer]

Nice idea. With your main subject so dead center it just doesn't have the impact it could. I would think that if you were to have pulled back slightly and included more space above your subject by including more sky your photo would have been improved.

[realworld]

Thanks for the tip.

[dmm96452]

I'm with OT. In addition her shirt being so close to the color of the water isn't working for me. A color that stands out against the water the way her shorts do I think would look better.