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    Now Wash Your Hands

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    Re: Now Wash Your Hands

    ...awesome
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    Feel free to edit my images for critique, just let me know what you did.

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    Re: Now Wash Your Hands

    wow, very nice. Multiple exposures I am guessing? I really need to learn how to do that.

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    Re: Now Wash Your Hands

    The first thing I notice is that I start looking at details. With the lighting I have to look closely to try to figure out what that thing(s) in the wall is.
    I consider this to be a good thing; forcing the viewer to look closely and I think many will want to look closely with the immediate interest of the composition.
    I really like this type of image for its simplicity in subject matter that brings out many more complex questions. Not only the investigation of the details but also the
    what/when/where/ and even why.

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    Re: Now Wash Your Hands

    I might like it better without the door frame (or whatever it is) on the left - or maybe with the door frame farther into that of the image and straightened/leveled. Not sure.

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    Re: Now Wash Your Hands

    Quote Originally Posted by draymorton
    I might like it better without the door frame (or whatever it is) on the left - or maybe with the door frame farther into that of the image and straightened/leveled. Not sure.
    Yeah toying with cropping that out...will give it a go and see


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    Re: Now Wash Your Hands

    VM - As good as your others. The lighting, composition and subject matter are top notch. Technical execution is incredible. The only thing I would consider changing is to crop out the bottom horizontal dark area, as I think it is a stronger image w/o it.

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    Re: Now Wash Your Hands

    As usual your PP skills really show off in this sort of work.
    I have no clue how the original looks like but this one I found funny or "unnatural" go the sun or light hits the sink but not he cabinet to its right. Oh! and also crop a bit or clone out the door frame to the left of the sink

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