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    (not richard simmons) in white pt I

    This was actually my first try at getting the whites right.
    It's a static shot and I think the flower is a bit too high in the frame for it to work as such..
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    Re: (not richard simmons) in white pt I

    It may be just a touch high, but the whites look fantastic with plenty of texture on the faces of the petals. I also like how the stem passes behind from the lower left corner to the upper right.

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    Re: (not richard simmons) in white pt I

    It's not too high it's too much in the center. It looks more cool then warm. I would just crop off the right side, like the other stem that is in the corner then it will be good. Looks a step under exposed as well. Can just bring up the mid tones?

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