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Thread: not a gym

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    Senior Member armando_m's Avatar
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    not a gym



    On tuesday night I get together with other photographers to take photos at a studio, this time I was surprised to find a girl, that does gymnastics, was participating as a model

    I shot this with 2 lights with the intention to emphasize her incredible shape

    I do not quite like the background, this was not the main event happening and I didn't have a backdrop available, guess it would be nicer in a bigger space ,like a real gym , but then maybe I wouldn't have access to big lights ...

    anyway, what do you think ?

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    Re: not a gym

    Wow!



    uhm.....



    so...

    The highlight on her right thigh, left elbow, right shoulder, and chin all exquisitely placed. An excellent highlight clip. The b/g.... Perfectly fine. Lets see some of the other shots. Maybe reduce luminance or something on the intersection of the wall so the horizontal line is less prominent.

    Excellent physique, okay I'm done...
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    Re: not a gym

    NIce model and pose. I agree with you about BG, it doesn't help the photograph. But other than that, it's good. Her pose is great and I like all the highlights on her body.
    Liban

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