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Thread: Not Breathing

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    West Coast Ninja christopher_platt's Avatar
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    Not Breathing

    First of all, general criticisms? Second of all, which do you like better? I think the color might interact better with the title (the blue face), but I like the ominous feeling the B&W gives in connection with the title. Let me know what you think.
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    Re: Not Breathing

    What a great shot of a baby first coming into this world! I prefer the black and white right now, the color just isn't working for me. For my general critique, the object in the bottom right is very distracting. But other then that, it's a neat shot,

    Jared

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    Re: Not Breathing

    OMG, poor baby...the color ver. is just scary...OMG...hope he breaths...the B&W ver. works better for me. and i agree with jared, the thing (hand?) @ the bottom right shouldn't be there.

    The Photoman AYU

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