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Thread: Normal Bench

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    Normal Bench

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    Re: Normal Bench

    xwing, the first thing that caught my eye was the bench, but the blown out area by the bridge pulled my eyes away from it. The partial bush in the lower right doesn't need to be there, so I'd crop it out.
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    Re: Normal Bench

    I like this image . Good feel to it with the post processing as well. I agree with John about toning down the bright area by the bridge and lose the sliver of bush in the lower right corner. However, absolutley keep the piece of bush in the left.
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    Re: Normal Bench

    thanks guys, will do.

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    Re: Normal Bench

    Agree with the above except I think it would be better to clone the bush out rather than crop it out as it would mess with the balance too much.
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