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The one thing that "feels" a little off is the horizon line/tilt. It feels slightly tilted to the left. Hard to say with a wide angle lens, and maybe a little lens correction would help, but... The light post in the center seems to go a little to the left, and the one on the far left is very exaggerated tilting away, and the one furthest to the right of center seems the straightest...
This is a unique find. Reminds me of southern California a little with all the small mountains and hills. You did a pretty nice job on it; the 'swirl' is mostly captured, the mountains in the distance are a plus, and the big picture is captured. I think you might be able to get a little better shot though. It seems tilted CCW by about 2 degrees. I wish you could have gotten even higher to remove some of those pesky foreground bushes. Maybe a slightly wider angle to see more. I like it as an abstract, but if one car was sitting there it would create a nice subject for the viewer to see, and the lights could act as supporting characters.
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