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    Night Photo III re-post

    Cropped and cleaned up. Comments?

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    Re: Night Photo III re-post

    Better balance. Looks tighter too. Good job CF...

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    Re: Night Photo III re-post

    Thanks, Greg.

    Comments from the first post helped with this shot.

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    Re: Night Photo III re-post

    Two things.

    1) Looks crooked. It might be the concrete at the top. But I'm pretty sure it's not straight.

    2) I can't help but wonder what it would look like with people on the stairs. I'm sure it's a long exposure, so maybe you could play with some blur? How about people with flashlights so you get streaks of light up the stairs?

    I guess I'm looking for something to give it some more light. Aside from the tilt, it's technically very good. But it's missing something for it to really make me interested.
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    Re: Night Photo III re-post

    You are right on both accounts; it is a bit crooked and it needs something. I was out shooting night shots and this was one of them, just thought I would share. Thanks for making the comments thought. Every little bit helps.

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