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    Re: Neglected Love

    Alexandre,

    Welcome to the boards.

    Hmm. I think this is a decent idea, but I personally don't feel the execution is right. The tilt would be very easy to correct in post processing, but the bright high-key background doesn't match the mood of a flower. But maybe that was the point - a flower in the city, competing with concrete and the hectic work pace(?) Anyway, the vehicle needs a few more dark areas to really look like a vehicle (it almost looks like a shinny UFO ), and I would also widen up the scene a bit: seems a tad cramped.

    Like I said - decent concept, just needs a different implementation.

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    Re: Neglected Love

    I love the concept, and have thought of doing something very similar. I agree the background needs to be a little darker, grungier, or something. I don't mind the tilt, I think when used sparingly, it works well, and for this image I think it works to convey the mood. Great shot.

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