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    Nazareth College -- Two versions

    Which works better? Feedback welcome. Thanks.
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    Re: Nazareth College -- Two versions

    Go wide! Young one go wide.

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    Re: Nazareth College -- Two versions

    they both feel tilted to the right. just barely but noticable
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    Re: Nazareth College -- Two versions

    Quote Originally Posted by Dylan8i
    they both feel tilted to the right. just barely but noticable
    Anyone else notice a tilt to the right? I'm looking real hard, and they look straight to me, but then I've seen 'em so much I can't really tell anymore.

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    Re: Nazareth College -- Two versions

    Allrighty.....I went back and picked another point to use as a reference for straightening. I hope this does the trick.



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    Re: Nazareth College -- Two versions

    im still seeing the tilt alittle but my vote is for number 1

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    Re: Nazareth College -- Two versions

    i still see it to.... could it possibly just be an illusion that the building wasn't shot competely straight on? the window inbetween the middle columns is closer to the right side column that the left.


    any ways i do like the wider one, with the trees framing it.
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    Re: Nazareth College -- Two versions

    Quote Originally Posted by Dylan8i
    i still see it to.... could it possibly just be an illusion that the building wasn't shot competely straight on? the window inbetween the middle columns is closer to the right side column that the left.


    any ways i do like the wider one, with the trees framing it.
    I don't remember if I shot straight on. I took this a year ago. You may be right. My positioning might have been a little off center. Thanks for the comments.

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    Re: Nazareth College -- Two versions

    I too thought there was a slight tilt to the right. But I check it and the horizontal lines are straight. I agree that it is probably caused by the angle the picture was taken at. I like the wide shot the best. I think the trees on both sides add to the framing of the picture.

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