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Thread: Narcissus

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    Narcissus

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    Re: Narcissus

    It's too dark. Try fixing the brightness.

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    Re: Narcissus

    I think they are very nice.I like how you famed them and how in the second one you focused on just the middle flower .I do agree though that they do need to be brighter.

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    Re: Narcissus

    Yeah, I have to agree with the statements before hand. I don't know that that helps anymore than what they said did, but maybe do an auto levels in adobe or something like that?
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    Re: Narcissus

    Yes I also feel they are 1 to 2 f-stops under exposured. They are nice. The shallow depth of field works here IMO. But I feel the top composition looks somewhat cramped, like the flowers are almost off the edge of the frame. maybe a vertical format would have been a little better in this situation...

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    Re: Narcissus

    I'm thinking you may need to calibrate your monitor-everything about these is pretty good except the exposure so I expect it is a computer problem rather than a photographer problem.
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