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    Cool My time with a model

    I have a friend who wants to be a model, I said I would take her pic for the cost of me doing it as its just for the experience.

    Here are a few.







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    Re: My time with a model

    Well, I think the first one is interesting. It reminds me of a movie (not sure which). She seems like a friendly vampire living in a small village somewhere. The other two, errr.... what can I say? She seems to be taking the opportunity to be silly, which is OK for fun I guess.

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    Re: My time with a model

    Is that her actual skin color?
    From the poses and appearance she might like it but it isn't natural.
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    Re: My time with a model

    They all seem green hued. I like the first one, kind of creepy but cool... the second one is not flattering to her figure at all, and the shot itself is confusing, the third one is better but I would like to see her not sticking her tongue out as well as have her legs just a little lower to accent her waist more.

    What type of modeling is she hoping to do?
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    Re: My time with a model

    Like this?


    Here is another


    Oh and With the first pic I was thinking I would take a pic that would look good on a poster for a movie!

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    Re: My time with a model

    She's got a great goth look to her. The first image would be my favorite if she was larger in the frame...too much wasted space with the foliage when you could have concentrated on her. My own personal tastes, but these would look great in b&w. Color doesn't do it for me here, especially with the look of your model.

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    Re: My time with a model

    Like Charles said, that first one would be great in b & w if she were a little closer. This is great that you've got someone willing to be your model just for the experience.
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