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Thread: My Niece

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    My Niece

    Well, I posted a shot of my nephew before so here is my niece. I think the focus is off on her???

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    Re: My Niece

    The focus is a bit soft but is just right for this shot in my opinion. I wish she wasn't too centered and the crop was a little tighter. I really like the exposure and the mood is right.
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    Re: My Niece

    Quote Originally Posted by manacsa
    The focus is a bit soft but is just right for this shot in my opinion. I wish she wasn't too centered and the crop was a little tighter. I really like the exposure and the mood is right.
    Thanks for the great feedback. I went and did some cropping. What do you think? I like it better. I thought it would lose some feeling of the field but I like that she is now off center and her gaze goes out of the shot to the left where there is space.

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    Re: My Niece

    It looks simply amazing. Her eyes add such an effect to it. I think it might add to it if she was facing the sun, not facing away from it, but maybe this way the strands of her hair blowing in the wind add a better effect.....but, overall great shot. :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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    Re: My Niece

    Quote Originally Posted by LoudPicture
    It looks simply amazing. Her eyes add such an effect to it. I think it might add to it if she was facing the sun, not facing away from it, but maybe this way the strands of her hair blowing in the wind add a better effect.....but, overall great shot. :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
    Thanks for the kind feedback. I like the crop much better. Here eyes are much more a part of the picture now. She has the most amazing eyes. It would have been interesting to see the sun from the other direction, but I think you are right about it adding a nice effect to her hair in the wind from the direction it actually came from.

    Thanks again.

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