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    Not-so-recent Nikon Convert livin4lax09's Avatar
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    my inhabitants of my room

    I can officially say I am photoed out for the day. Tomorrow morning i get to go drop of my slide film, pick it up wednesday morning, then have it critiqued in class. 36 exposures, each one remotely different. it has certainly been a challenge. this is on (digital) shot of one of the ideas. Me and my roommates.

    Shot with the 10d and sigma 24-70 f/2.8. 1" f/2.8, ISO 100, flash triggered by pressing the test button (PWs have no batteries).

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    Re: my inhabitants of my room

    Looks very professional. Like something that you would see on a CD or in a magazine, maybe you should be teaching the class. Very nice job on this one. I really good choice for B&W. It reminds me of the Rolling Stones new CD "A Bigger Bang" with the use of the flashlight....
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    Not-so-recent Nikon Convert livin4lax09's Avatar
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    Re: my inhabitants of my room

    thanks for the comment greg. Maybe I should be teaching the class? Uhh, for right now I'll stick with being the student. lol. But that's definitely a huge compliment. And thanks a ton for the reference, being a young'n I never really listened to the rolling stones much, but I googled it, and it's kind of hard to miss the similarities. Very nice image as well. Again, thanks for pointing me towards it.

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    Re: my inhabitants of my room

    Nice composition. Black and white images can be so dramatic.

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    Re: my inhabitants of my room

    it came out nice and clear no noise at all did you edit it in photoshop? when every i take pictures in the dark i have to do alot of work in photoshop to reduce the noise just wondering what you did. but anyway i like the shot its mysterious like what are those guys doing over there, like witches around a pot or something lol.

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    Not-so-recent Nikon Convert livin4lax09's Avatar
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    Re: my inhabitants of my room

    i had to darken a bit of the image, but other than the stuff right behind me and my friend in the sweatshirt (the room wasn't big enough to not shoot against a bed or something) there wasn't any PS done. This is ISO 100 on the 10d, if your camera's got a lot of noise on ISO 100, tou should have it looked at, in my opinion. Unless it's a point and shoot.

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    Re: my inhabitants of my room

    photography just a hobby of mine so i don't have any great equipment. im only 17 so my money tends to drift towards my car or my girlfriend lol i have a Panasonic Dmc Fz-20 it has Leica lens with a f2.8 so i cant really compare to a dslr but i was just wondering about your technique thanks

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    Re: my inhabitants of my room

    Somewhat of a cliché shot. (I did one like it, before you were born.) Nevertheless, the problem as seen in this photo is getting the lighting even on each person.

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