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    My friend jo

    I photoshopped this and I think there are some problems with it. What do you think?
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    Re: My friend jo

    i really like the color and "look" of this... how did you achieve that in photoshop? i think it would be nice to see more of her and less of the blank space on the right.....
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    Re: My friend jo

    Welcome to the forums!
    I don't do this kind of effect so will only say that I agree with Ambrya on the composition.
    Too much blank space on right and not enough of her. I do like the pose and face.
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    Re: My friend jo

    im not entirely sure how I got to this, I was just messing around a little bit haha. The original looked like this
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    Re: My friend jo

    I think the first image posted is great. The two colours are a very positive part of this shot. Whatever you did has produced a very refreshing image. Well done.
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    Re: My friend jo

    I actually like the first one a LOT. Great job all the way around.

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    Re: My friend jo

    Love how you worked on the original. Very artsy shot, i would also go with that one! The negative space works well imo.
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