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Thread: my first shoot

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    my first shoot

    hi everyone

    number 1


    number 2


    number 3


    number 4


    number 5



    see you soon

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    Re: my first shoot

    great shots! nive vivid colors, great PP work. The raspberries should probably have the one in focus where the texture is facing the camera, but other than that they look great! I love the first duck shot. Very well done. You have taken the everyday stuff and made it look interesting, which is what I think every good photographer strives for.

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    Re: my first shoot

    These are excellent! I agree with everything livin4lax09 already said, I'm really looking forward to seeing more of your images!

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    Re: my first shoot

    thank you so much for your commentary Copy_Kot and livin4lax09

    sorry, but I don't speak english very well.

    this is the area where I took the pictures 7 and 5 , you can see the sofa color and the background of my pictures...it's the same.



    numero 7


    numero 8


    numero 9


    numero 10


    numero 11


    numero 12

    numero 13


    this is the area where I took the pictures 11 and 12


    thank a lot
    Olivier QC

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    13 is awesome. I'll say again...you manage to make art out of the mundane, and that's awe-inspiring. what kind of macro lens are you using?

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    Re: my first shoot

    thank you so much for your commentary Copy_Kot and livin4lax09

    sorry, but I don't speak english very well.

    this is the area where I took the pictures 7 and 5


    numero 7


    numero 8


    numero 9


    numero 10 the broccoli


    numero 11 the leek


    numero 12

    numero 13


    this is the area where I took the pictures 11 and 12


    thank a lot
    Olivier QC

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    Re: my first shoot

    hello everyone,

    numero 14



    numero 15


    good night
    olivier QC

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    Re: my first shoot

    another one



    bye

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    Re: my first shoot

    #1 is is the best, you can't beat a good duck picture. #1 is worth a thousand words to me but I just don't have the time right now.

    How can I be lost
    If I've got nowhere to go?

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    Re: my first shoot

    Your images really stand out. Are you using a D200?

    Thanks for posting...









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    Re: my first shoot

    Well, that settles it. I'm throwing away my camera.:mad2:

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    Re: my first shoot

    I agree...Image 13 is STUNNING !!!









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    Re: my first shoot

    thank you everyone

    Tyson L. Sparks
    I love the duck number1 ,
    I had with me some pieces of bread and i put them on the grass near of me,
    I saw a duck watched the bread...after 1 or 2 minutes, it came and I shoot him with my camera.
    sorry for my english.


    starriderrick
    my equipment
    body: - D70s
    lens : - Nik 18-70mm - Micro-Nik 105mm VR - Sig 70-300mm APO macro.
    Flash : - SB-600
    other(s) : tripod manfrotto 190CL...rotule 486RC2...Remote Cord MC-DC1...Softbox lumiquest.

    D200 it's my dream, but for the moment i don't have money for that

    swmdrayfan
    I'm throwing away my camera

    don't throwing away your camera swmdrayfan
    for only one pictures, I made at least 10 or 15 shoot and only one is good for me
    I try many angles and F/D

    have nice day
    OlivierQC

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    Re: my first shoot

    Olivier,
    I was kidding about throwing away my camera. It was basically a compliment on your photos. They're all excellent. They really showed me how much I still need to learn about everything.

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    Re: my first shoot

    Stunning photos..
    ~And this is a good day~


    ~Yes please,..ask me if you can edit my photos. The need help.

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    Re: my first shoot

    Oliver QC, these are all really good photo's. I would be very proud to say I took any of them.

    These would make a great addition to the Nature and Wildlife forum if you would not mind posting them there a well.

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    Re: my first shoot

    hello,

    thank you so much swmdrayfan, Yarrow, Copy_Kot.


    swmdrayfan
    I know... I know... about your camera :wink5:
    They really showed me how much I still need to learn about everything
    so do i, i think we learn every time... everybody.

    Copy_Kot
    great idea, I didn't see the Other Photography Forums
    Copy_Kot :thumbsup:

    my new post:
    Nature Olivier QC

    see you soon

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    Re: my first shoot

    very nice!!! the lighting and camera angles you have going are really working out well.

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