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    wannabe
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    my First model shoot

    I worked real hard on this shoot. I mowed the grass, waited for just the right lighting. I even have grass stains. Let me know if these work.


    D700
    85mm 1.8 D
    24-70 2.8 ED
    70-200 2.8 ED VRII
    2xSB900
    Elinchrom Ranger RX 1100watt heads.

    http://dustindraperphotography.com/

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    Liz
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    Re: my First model shoot

    Nice shots! I like the lighting better on the 2nd one. The first one is good, but seems a little dark - it may be the angle, though.

    I think you nailed it on the 2nd one.

    Liz

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    Re: my First model shoot

    Not Bad.... I like the lighting better in the second one too, but I wish the dogs head was turned the other way more because then it would show his eyes better, right now they are pretty dark and kind of blend into his body.

    Nice grass though! Wish mine was that green!
    Summer Katz
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