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    My Favorite Gal Sabrina

    Did some shooting with some new studio lights tonight and put together this little photoshop photo. Thought it was unique in the way I did it, so if there's any thoughts or comments let me know. Enjoy
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    Re: My Favorite Gal Sabrina

    I think this photograph is a bit too busy.
    My eye has a hard time with it, in that the lines the bones create are too much to handle visually, they are just too dominate.
    Perhaphs you could have made your dog bigger or centered since it is really more of a portrait of the dog.
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    Re: My Favorite Gal Sabrina

    The white around the edge of the dog is pretty simple in the photoshop world. It looks like its missing something on the right like text or a graphic logo. Mabye a different color for the background of the dog bones or have that shot at a slight angle. I dont see much photoshop stuff on here so i give you props for that.

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    Re: My Favorite Gal Sabrina

    Bob - I agree with Themage that the right side of the photo could use some text or something. It almost seems like an advertisement (it would work). The white aura around the dog definitely shows it's a digital manipulation, but that's obvious anyway from the angle and all so it isn't bad. I think the background color could be something more exciting? Not sure what color, but something with more illuminance. I like the dog's eyes here. - GB
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