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I hope that's an old phone number (you might not want it on here).
The image really doesn't do anything for me (sorry), it's too bland (sorry again). Maybe if the complete phone cord was in the frame and there were some shadows... or something to make it look a little more moody.
i concur. What a lot of people don't realize is that "remove color" doesn't turn a photo into a true black and white. well, it removes the color, but in no way gives it a true b&w pop. drop the phone to the lower right, have the cord cover the bottom part of the frame, get some shadows on the wall, crush the blacks, do an s-curve, and it should be great! it's a good subject, you just need to reshoot it. oh and shoot on a lower ISO because the noise detracts.