Mural Depicting Downtown

[Don Schaeffer]

[Frog]

Great mural.
If you cropped it any, I'd go back and get that top corner of the building back in.
Its a bit dark too.....maybe can be lightened up in post edit or if its near your wait for better light.
I think the angle works but needs more on the left.

Thanks for showing it.

[jbaldocchi]

Hi Don,

Cool image. The lawn and the poles almost look like the're part of the mural.

Jim B.

[J-Dogg Productions]

i like the mural i agree with jbaldocchi if i didnt read his comment id think the grass adn poles are pert of the pic mtoo

great shot

[Ronnoco]

Darken the sky and lighten the mural in postprocessing or layer a software graduated blue filter over your photo controlling the transparency.

Ronnoco

[Greg McCary]

I agree with the others on the lighting, but another strong composition Don.
Greg

[GB1]

Very artsy shot. I agree with everything Frog wrote. Also agree that it has a little too much blue. But it was a good capture overall and it appears that your low angle worked well, with a few tech issues that might be correctable.

This place calls for a reshoot........

GB

[Don Schaeffer]

Thanks for your comments. I agree about exposure.

[MB1]

Now this one I really like. I would like to see the same image with better light (is it on the north side of a building?).

I really like your crop and the way the foreground blends in with the mural.

[Don Schaeffer]

Carbon:

Yes, north side of the building

[readingr]

Don,

I agree with Carbon on lighting. I would also like to see a bit more room around the building.

Other than that I like it a lot.

Roger

[Don Schaeffer]

Thanks Roger