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Thread: Mount Moran

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    Mount Moran

    Mount Moran, Teton National Park.
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    Re: Mount Moran

    I like it but I keep finding my self moving th page up and down cause I like both subjects. I think it would be even better if you could get down closer the the buildingand then get the shot of the mountain above it, seems there is too much space between the two.but other then that its great
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    Re: Mount Moran

    I thought the same thing when I was editing this one. Too much space negative space in the middle ground. I couldn't get lower because the snow was at least 3 feet deep and I forgot my snowshoes. You've confirmed my thoughts on this one.
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    Re: Mount Moran

    If you had got lower the treeline would have blocked the view if the mountains and low clouds. I like it as is.
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    Re: Mount Moran

    I think the building is the keeper here. Take more shots of it.

    And don't forget your snow shoes next time!
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