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    Morning Greeting

    Taken @ the jetty of Ubin Island in Singapore ... A rare place where we can only find some peace away from the concrete jungle of city life ...
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    Re: Morning Greeting

    A slight tilt on the horizon and those two black dots are a distraction. Remove them and staighten your horizon and you will have a beatiful pic.Well done.
    Bobby
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    Re: Morning Greeting

    The actual image is so small due to the big frame. So, it's hard to get a good look at the details. With my monitor, I cannot really see the horizon. I think the image could be improved if the horizon was a bit stronger.
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    Re: Morning Greeting

    Quote Originally Posted by juzzus
    Taken @ the jetty of Ubin Island in Singapore ... A rare place where we can only find some peace away from the concrete jungle of city life ...
    That's a superb composition! I don't mind the two "black dots" (rocks??) but I agree that the horizion line should be straightened. I have no problem seeing the horizon line on my monitor. The colours are gorgeous.

    Seb

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    Re: Morning Greeting

    Wow! That's a beautiful shot. Other than what everyone else mentioned, I can't find anything wrong with it (and I didn't see the other stuff until they pointed it out).

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    Re: Morning Greeting

    Thank you for the pointers guys ... appreciated

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    Re: Morning Greeting

    Well seen and composed - good use of the focal length of the lens.

    Good as is - though I would suggest a burning-in of the pier in the distance under your sunrise/set.

    Tuna

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