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    Morning at the beach

    This is a two exposure composite. Place Rockaway Beach, OR.

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    Re: Morning at the beach

    Looks good, the exposure process. I can see the distant hills/mountains in the bg, and the sand , sky looks well. The only thing I have problem with is your placement of the horizon. It cuts the picture right in half.
    please do not edit and repost my photos


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    Re: Morning at the beach

    I'm with Gary on all counts. Lovely job though.

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    Re: Morning at the beach

    I agree with the others. The wide-format cropping was a smart move however. It's a minimalist type of shot, but offers just enough. The waves on the left make it interesting, and the depth on the right is nice. If anything, I would have slide up the composition to include more of the sky and less of the beach (this would also have taken care of the split), but that's a hindsight thing.

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    Re: Morning at the beach

    This is a lovely image. The centering of the horizon doesn't bother me because of the expanse covered in the frame. The mountains and water actually give me a gand between the sand and sky that I find so appealing. The only bad thing is that this shot makes me want a pina colada in the worst way!
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    Re: Morning at the beach

    Nice shot. Love the deep blue skies and great job in the double exposure, it worked really well.
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    Re: Morning at the beach

    As all have said cut about an inch of the sand and its a much better composition


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    Re: Morning at the beach

    Nice, it looks as if you could just walk into it and go on forever.

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    Re: Morning at the beach

    I think a letterbox might benefit this one.
    The surf in the distance is so clean. I think the houses on the right could do with a little levels adjustment just to let us see them better as they are a very important part of the composition.
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    Re: Morning at the beach

    Quote Originally Posted by LeeIs
    Nice shot. Love the deep blue skies and great job in the double exposure, it worked really well.
    I should of restiched the image pare. That was stiched vith version 2.x and the program is
    much improved and is up to version 4.

    Quote Originally Posted by Overbeyond
    I think a letterbox might benefit this one.
    The surf in the distance is so clean. I think the houses on the right could do with a little levels adjustment just to let us see them better as they are a very important part of the composition.
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    I wish it was posable but the dynamic range is not there, It was a very sunny morning and the shadows were very dark. I will repost the image later.

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    Re: Morning at the beach

    Quote Originally Posted by freygr
    I should of restiched the image pare. That was stiched vith version 2.x and the program is
    much improved and is up to version 4.



    I wish it was posable but the dynamic range is not there, It was a very sunny morning and the shadows were very dark. I will repost the image later.

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    Here it is cropped and restiched. It took me a little time to find the two photos, I had to finally go to the paper catalog before I could find them

    Quote Originally Posted by Overbeyond
    I think a letterbox might benefit this one.
    The surf in the distance is so clean. I think the houses on the right could do with a little levels adjustment just to let us see them better as they are a very important part of the composition.
    Tom
    The houses lost out to the automated fine turning during the stiching.

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    Re: Morning at the beach

    I really like your new crop (though it takes a bit too much from the sand). It's very nice as is though.

    I think it makes for a great panorama and the houses have a bit more detail this way. Great job on the stitching again.
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    Re: Morning at the beach

    Thats a very pretty scene well captured.
    Good job on the stitching,
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    Re: Morning at the beach

    Quote Originally Posted by LeeIs
    I really like your new crop (though it takes a bit too much from the sand). It's very nice as is though.

    I think it makes for a great panorama and the houses have a bit more detail this way. Great job on the stitching again.
    The first post is uncropped. It was sticked with the Smoky City Design: The Panorama Factory V2

    Quote Originally Posted by mdmc
    Thats a very pretty scene well captured.
    Good job on the stitching,
    Mark.
    The second cropped was stiched with version 4m32 the lastest version in full automatic mode. Just import the images and say go: and you end up with a uncroped panorama. But you can always go back and recrop and manually set the stich exclude(s). With the new version you can even save the output as Photo Shop file. The nice thing its not a $$$ three digit program, its under a hundred dollars.

    I've tried to stich using photo shop. I've only been able to stich one and only one panorama, that panorama was taken with a tripod, a really cheap tripod at that.

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