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    Morning

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    Re: Morning

    Ooooh! Very nice, love the rolling shadows!

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    Re: Morning

    Great strong and simple composition.

    I think the white balance is likely off-the image looks to me to have a green tint.

    You might try cropping down from the top to remove about 1/2 of the fence and reduce the sand without the great shadows on the upper right.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Morning

    Love the rolling sand and shadows. Wish the posts were sharp too.
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    Re: Morning

    Thanks, guys.

    Yeah, I wish the posts weren't so soft either, but I didn't notice that at the time.

    If I get a chance later, I'll try the crop suggested.

    BTW: It's snow on my deck

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    Re: Morning

    Quote Originally Posted by Cathathome

    BTW: It's snow on my deck
    Could just as easily be passed off as a sandy beach

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    Re: Morning

    Nice shot, good eye. Posts a little sharper but overall nice.

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    Re: Morning

    I love sand fences!

    I think the meat of the shot is in the sand and reflection. That part definitely works. The fence should also play a big part, but it is too straight and plain to be of interest. I would crop most if not all of it out of the image.

    Sand fences are so great.. simple and uncluttered. Too bad there's none on the Cali west coast, at least in the southern parts of the state.

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    Re: Morning

    Very nice. Very pure and simple. My only nit would be the small gray cast of the snow. I would try to get the snow a little more pure white.

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