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Thread: more geese :)

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    more geese :)

    Last shot to be posted of the series.
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    Re: more geese :)

    This one would be great with some action or drama (e.g., flapping wings, communication between the geese), which I realize is easier said than done, having taken at least a hundred pix of Canadian geese myself and usually missing the perfect action moment. Keep trying! I haven't seen the other pix (your title is 'more geese') yet.

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    Re: more geese :)

    It's got the classic rules of composition but there is really nothing exciting about it. It's a photo of "geese walking". I have to agree with pweb, flapping wings or signs of aggression between the geese would have made it much more interesting. The tree shadow in the middle doesn't help either.

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    Re: more geese :)

    The other geese are posted under the title: follow the leader. No "action" there either though. This was my first attempt at any type of wildlife. I didn't even know what they were (except some kind of bird).

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    Re: more geese :)

    Not bad at all for a first attempt. I don't mean to sound overly harsh in my critiques but I always critique in based against an optimal scenario and can't really take a strangers experience level into account.

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    Re: more geese :)

    I don't think you were harsh at all. I want people to let me know when i suck (which is most of the time ). It is the only way to improve.

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