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    Bubbles

    What do ya think?


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    Re: Bubbles

    dam imageshack is messing up tonight. ill try again

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    Re: Bubbles

    it needs a tigher crop. I liked it a lot before I scrolled down. Just crop the bubbles. It leaves a lot up to the imagination that way. This has a snapshot look.

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    Re: Bubbles

    I agree with Brent...PS out everything except the rim and the bubbles...I think it would be a real keeper then!!! I like the angle you used on this. Nice work!!
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    Re: Bubbles

    do you guys mean crop it in a circular shape to fit the rim or crop in a square and fit in the most possible?
    Thanks.

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    Re: Bubbles

    maybe something like this?


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    Re: Bubbles

    I prefer the disk version, nicley captured.

    However, if you removed all the background from the original then it wold be a much better shot.

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    Re: Bubbles

    I like this more abstract second version. I tried an even more abstract rectangular crop within the rim but though that it loses too much. The black bg helps it pop.
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    Re: Bubbles

    There...that is what I was thinking about...much better!!!
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    Re: Bubbles

    Thanks guys!

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