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it needs a tigher crop. I liked it a lot before I scrolled down. Just crop the bubbles. It leaves a lot up to the imagination that way. This has a snapshot look.
I agree with Brent...PS out everything except the rim and the bubbles...I think it would be a real keeper then!!! I like the angle you used on this. Nice work!!
Ken
However, if you removed all the background from the original then it wold be a much better shot.
Roger
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I like this more abstract second version. I tried an even more abstract rectangular crop within the rim but though that it loses too much. The black bg helps it pop.
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