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Thread: model part two

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    model part two

    well I did some refinements Hop these look better.



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    Re: model part two

    I want to think the first one is too busy in the foreground but it actually works ok for me.

    She isn't quite young enough and buff enough to pull off the second shot.

    The third image almost makes it but the background hurts it.

    The portrait makes her look like she has a black eye (as in bruised).

    Go with the first one.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: model part two

    well she had a motorcycle accident 2 months ago and has 8 screws and a rod in her shoulder thats why she were a scarf to hide the scar.

    who about this. little to much whiteness maybe.
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    Re: model part two

    She really does look a little street hard. The hippy pose in the second shot looks good IMO.

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    Re: model part two

    Quote Originally Posted by Don Schaeffer
    She really does look a little street hard. The hippy pose in the second shot looks good IMO.
    So she like to smoke Cigars she only 37 years old.If I knew how to make here softer skin via photoshop I would.
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    Re: model part two

    I would blur the tag #. I like her like she is. If her left eye is the hurt one then have her shift around so it is behind. The background is in focus and as such it is a big distraction. Hang a sheet or something to even it out.

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