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    Mission

    San Xavier is the oldest Spanish mission in the US (at least that's what they say), near Tucson Arizona in March. The main building was under renovation.

    Two shots here one with multiple edits. C&Cs welcome!

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    Re: Mission

    Love the composition of the first image and all of the contrasting elements, very nicely done.
    The second shot(s) are fine as far as it goes but the first one really holds my interest

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    Re: Mission

    I like the first one as well but think a crop at the top would help. I also think you should clone the flood light on the other side of the fence.
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    Re: Mission

    Thanks. Yes, I agree that the first one is more interesting compositionally and is probably better geometrically too. That flood light I didn't even notice and yes it would be better if I cloned it out. Will try it.
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    Re: Mission

    Hi,
    I like the colours of the second shot. The white is really glowing.
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