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Very nicely done, Phil. I like the look and feel of the image with tone and light.
My only "concern" with this is the nose shadow"s" which seem a little confusing to me. There is the shadow below and to the side which is a nice loop lighting but then there is the dark shadow to the side which suggests there was light from under and to the side creating the shadow there as well. I would suggest trying to blend out much of that side nose shadow a bit to a point where its softer and not so prominent.
Hey, I love the colour tone in this photo, and the sharpness is outstanding!!
Very well done makeup and hair.
The only cc IMO is that the eyeline and book don't seem to quite mach up, in the angle side of things, but thats nitpicking and not a huge thing!
thanks...
what happened is... either she puts the mag lower which would close here eyelids more and lesser eye/pupil showing. OR put the mag up and show MORE eyes.... so we came up with this. It looks like she is reading the top part of the magazine.
Very nicely done, Phil. I like the look and feel of the image with tone and light.
My only "concern" with this is the nose shadow"s" which seem a little confusing to me. There is the shadow below and to the side which is a nice loop lighting but then there is the dark shadow to the side which suggests there was light from under and to the side creating the shadow there as well. I would suggest trying to blend out much of that side nose shadow a bit to a point where its softer and not so prominent.
Thats all I got on this one...looking good.
thanks.
I missed that... I had to do some reconstructive nose bridge liquefying in that area and made her bridge narrower and forgot about the shadows .... doh!!!
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