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    Mid air fight

    Hello Again.

    Two seagulls fighting for a landing spot, I've had this photo for a wile now, it was one of my first captures with my slr toy, I tought posting it here for comments in how I can improve this photo cropping/post processing etc, or your points of view.:idea:



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    Re: Mid air fight

    Great shot. Just the right amount of contrast and exposure.

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    Re: Mid air fight

    Kind of a neat shot. Looks like they're play fighting. The birds are acceptably sharp, though I do wish they were sharper, but not bad !

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    Re: Mid air fight

    I would look at cropping above the light and into that odd wing to the right , then clone out whatever tip of that odd wing is leftover.
    Please ask to edit photos and I'll do the same! :thumbsup:
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    Re: Mid air fight

    Rod wrote just what I was thinking. Nice capture. You did well...
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    Re: Mid air fight

    Great capture !!

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    Re: Mid air fight

    Quick eye!
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    Re: Mid air fight

    Thanks for all your suggestions and comments guy's.

    I'll try croping and clonening and add a bit of sharpness and see the final result.

    Once again thanks

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    Re: Mid air fight

    if you can, take that gull sitting on the roof out. It might be a distraction.
    Please ask to edit photos and I'll do the same! :thumbsup:
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    Re: Mid air fight

    I agree, lose the lonely wing coming from the right of the frame, I quite like the seagull standing on the roof in the background, suggests that it might be waiting to have a go next!! Just such a shame that we can't see both seagull heads but you did very well to capture this at all as I am sure that you had to be very quick indeed.

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