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Thread: Miami Beach

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    Miami Beach

    Sorry i havent been on in a long long while ive been realy bussy with school anyways i was just driving around Miami beach snapping pics and here is one of the favorites for driving around. hope you enjoy the southern life
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    Re: Miami Beach

    Quote Originally Posted by Young Shooter
    Sorry i havent been on in a long long while ive been realy bussy with school anyways i was just driving around Miami beach snapping pics and here is one of the favorites for driving around. hope you enjoy the southern life
    Hey YoungShooter,

    I am glad to see that you are back.

    I hate to say this but quite frankly, this picture doesn't works for me. The colors are pretty but that's it. The closests cars down the street doesn't seem to be quite in focus, the horizon line is slightly tilted, the lightning is harsh (well I guess that this is just how Miami is, I cannot really say) and I don't really see any center of interest in the composition.

    The perspectives lines from the street are very effective to draw the viewer straight to the background so this composition could be very effective if there was something special at the end of the street (just a thought).

    I hope that I doesnt sound too harsh but that's how I feel about this picture.

    regards

    Seb

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    Re: Miami Beach

    I always look at the picture first, before I read the comments of the photographer.
    You know what I was thinking about when I looked at this shot? A snapshot taken out of a car. Turned out that I was right too. My guess is that more people will have that same feeling.

    Like Seb said, there's not a lot going on in this image. With all those cars and sunshine you also expect some people walking around. Where were they? The fact that all diagonals come together in the center of the shot doesn't do the image any good either.

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    Re: Miami Beach

    Yeah thanks alot guys, i see what u mean, i gues i posted this because i didnt have anything better, i posted this and i asked my photography teacher what he thought and he just laughed at me for this, and by the way seb or whoever said this, ur comment was so not harsh i dont know why people are saying this, its a photo criqueing site this is what i wanted to know thanks
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