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Thread: Marlo fetish

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    Marlo fetish

    for lack of a better title....
    Anyway, worked on this and got it to where I wanted to go, I would like to run this by the forum to see if there is anything "wrong" that i may be missing here.

    This image goes along with the "marlo ll" posted here a little while back.

    thanks
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    Re: Marlo fetish

    Great shot as always from the steampunk! Speaking with an untrained eye, I can say that I liked the picture but the thing that keeps drawing my gaze the most is her knee. There's some kind of mark there that doesn't quite fit in with the porcelain tone of the rest of her skin and the normal tone of your pics. Your shots always look so perfect and the flawless appearence of the skin you regularly achieve is always something I like. I only mention it because it caught my attention and I would think you could fix it fairly easilly if you wanted to.

    I'm sorry if that is ultra nitpicky but it's the only thing I could think to critique because everything else looks great! I like her expression, the pose, the position of her hands, the contrast of the cherry lips and shoes, the shine of the black dress and the porcelain skin. Have I mentioned you have the best job ever?:thumbsup:
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    Re: Marlo fetish

    Perfection I think. You really nailed this one. I really love your off white BG's. The black, red, everything works here. Her pose also. and her expression are all great.

    Can't find anything to nitpick.
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    Re: Marlo fetish

    Bert, thanks man. . .you have a good eye for sure. I do like to remove undesireable blemishes and/or marks when they are unattractive without making the skin look plastic. I thought I went over this thoroughly but i do see what your pointing to. I'll have to look into that on the hi res file and see if its a blemish or scratch, but bottom line is it does not look right in this web version. Thanks for that.

    Liban, chalk this one up totally for Marlo, she just really nailed some poses and looks during the shoot. She also has a great sense of styling.
    I'm happy that you mention the off white bg's. Its something that I like and hope goes over well with everyone else
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    Re: Marlo fetish

    Hard to believe this is the same model from the portraits! Always impressed with your control of reflections in the shiny latex wardrobe. Agree with maplestreet's mention of the knee, but love it otherwise :thumbsup:

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    Re: Marlo fetish

    Quote Originally Posted by jetrim
    Hard to believe this is the same model from the portraits!
    Thank you, Jim. Not sure if thats a good thing or a bad thing bout the portrait reference lol. I take it she looks a lot more solemn in that last portrait as opposed to here.

    Yep, turns out the mark on the knee was a natural shadow, but came off wierd in compression and resizing. I did subdue it anyway just so it is not so noticeable in web.

    Much appreciated.
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