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Thread: Many Mansions

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    Many Mansions

    In My Father's House

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    Re: Many Mansions

    Great sky and wonderful light on the buildings. Nice grass line as well though I am distracted by the people (but usually am)

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    Re: Many Mansions

    What Jeff said, except for the people, I would like to see them bought out a bit more.
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    Isn't it a cool thing in nature that the colours never seem to clash...

    I have no issues with you editing my photos

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    Re: Many Mansions

    Thanks. Yeah it could go either way. I think you could clone them out, but if they are there they should probably be a stronger composition element by increasing the luminousity a bit.

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    Re: Many Mansions

    I think only the two on the left need bringing out, because they're in darker clothing than the one in the light shirt.
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    Re: Many Mansions

    cool... looks almost apocalyptic

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    Re: Many Mansions

    A nice composition, but as noted already a little too dark in the left foreground area where the people are laying out. lightening it up some could improve
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    Re: Many Mansions

    I, too, really like the light on the building and the sky.
    If you can bring the people out a bit, you'll have a real winner.
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    Re: Many Mansions

    Thanks Frog. I will work on it

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    Re: Many Mansions



    I tried to lighten the ppl in the foreground, but with all due respect to the white trash, I am thinking they should be cropped.

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    Re: Many Mansions

    That works.
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    Isn't it a cool thing in nature that the colours never seem to clash...

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    Re: Many Mansions

    Yup!......
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    Re: Many Mansions

    wonderful.. Thrilling image.

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