Man in the Window

[Greg McCary]

I am still trying to improve my street work so what do you think? Composition ok? Mood?


Man in a Window by Cosmonaut's, on Flickr

[hminx]

Possibly a little dark Greg .

[Greg McCary]

The man or the whole image?

[lew1970]

I like the photo, the windows leave you guessing on what's inside.
If the man was facing you my imagination could take me to a dark earie place.
If you could access that room, I would be tempted to try it.

[Overbeyond]

Very good Greg.
I like the different shapes and sizes of all the windows in such a small area and the man facing away from you works fine too.
I do feel it may be a little bit too contrasty but that is not a great issue.

[hminx]

The man or the whole image?

Possibly the whole image. But it may be, as pointed out, the contrast is right up there.

[Greg McCary]

Thanks again Pete, I dodged it slightly and posted an edit.

[smhardesty]

Greg,

I'm beginning to kinda like your 'street work'. You've posted some great shots. I like this one as well, but still like the shot of the 4 folks seated in front of the building better.

I have no issue with the contrast. Is there any way you might bring the man in the window out a little more? I like that his back is towards the camera, but think it would give the photo's story a little boost if he were just a tad bit more prominent.

[baldemort]

nicely seen shapes and composition but i;m not too keen on the shot of the back of the chap's head. profile would have been great. still nice tho.

[Greg McCary]

Thanks again all.

[eroosa]

Nice dark abyss with only the man visible. Nice street work

[Greg McCary]

Thanks eroosa.

[Abner]

Hi Greg,
Beautiful shot and I like the framing but it's very dark from inside.
I think colored picture will bring better results than black and white image.