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Thread: Maddie

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    Chris
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    Maddie

    Senior portrait.
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails Maddie-mb-174web.jpg   Maddie-mb-125web.jpg   Maddie-mb-110web.jpg   Maddie-mb-25web.jpg   Maddie-mb-3web.jpg  

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    Re: Maddie

    These are quite nice. I'm not fond of the last one because of bright background, but the others seem fine to me. I like #2 best.

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    Re: Maddie

    Nice portraits, get her an agent!

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    Re: Maddie

    They're all good shots. You blurred the background perfectly on all of them. #1 is my favorite. Now, to get her to use a few different expressions, tell her to make faces at the camera (ha ha ...). GB
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    Re: Maddie

    I tried that but her smiling was her best look and I didn't get tired of seeing it as it fits her.
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    Re: Maddie

    A great model and some good shots. The lighting/exposure is slightly uneven and off within photos and from photo to photo. This can be seen in the "change of skin colour" as in the tan in the shade for example. The bright one blows detail in the hair and along the edge of the shoulders of the jacket. In some cases also the hair has picked up the light but less so the face and eye area. A reflector would have helped. Also related to lighting, I could not tell the colour of her eyes.

    In general terms the "look" does not fit, in that more dressy casual clothes better suit the appearance and apparent style of your model. This is a very important area that cannot be forgotten when shooting a model.

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