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Shooting B&W with:
a Yashica 635, 120 roll - 80mm Yashinon lens and an Agfa Billy 0 (Zero) 127 roll - Solinar 7.5cm lens
Shooting color with:
a Yashica-Mat, 120 roll - 80mm Lumaxar lens and a Canon FTb, 135 roll - 55mm and 85mm FD lenses
Consider tightening the crop to get rid of the burned out corner and the excess space on the left. I also agree it needs sharpening.
Did you scan this yourself? Last time I did film, I had the developer make the scans to CD. I like the places the develop and scan in one machine from the negative. They do a better job than I.