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Thread: Macha

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    Keltic Knot Keltic Knot's Avatar
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    Macha

    Canon FTb w/800mm FD lens
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    Shooting B&W with:
    a Yashica 635, 120 roll - 80mm Yashinon lens and an Agfa Billy 0 (Zero) 127 roll - Solinar 7.5cm lens
    Shooting color with:
    a Yashica-Mat, 120 roll - 80mm Lumaxar lens and a Canon FTb, 135 roll - 55mm and 85mm FD lenses

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    Re: Macha

    Celtic, there's a lighter spot up in the top right corner that is drawing my eyes. Also it seems to need a little sharpening.
    John

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    Re: Macha

    Consider tightening the crop to get rid of the burned out corner and the excess space on the left. I also agree it needs sharpening.

    Did you scan this yourself? Last time I did film, I had the developer make the scans to CD. I like the places the develop and scan in one machine from the negative. They do a better job than I.

    800mm?
    Canon 5D MKII & Canon 7D

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    Re: Macha

    manacsa has a good suggestion in cropping just enough off the top and side to eliminate the bright corner. Great moment captured. Heart warming image.
    please do not edit and repost my photos


    gary


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