I really like the motion in this photo and the combination of the different focuses throughout. I do agree that the photo should be cropped down to remove the back wall and though I like the color it adds to the photo, the hose in center right is a bit distracting though there isn't much you can do about it. Overall, a winner in my book. I get excited just looking at it though I do have to focus on the subjects pretty hard to make it past the back wall.