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    Love, passed by.

    A series from Speyer.
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    Re: Love, passed by.

    Paul,

    I see what you're shooting for here. I think the scene has incredible potential but I also think the lighting is just too bright and even as is. I would crop off the left 20% of all of them because it adds nothing and makes the people too centered. I gravitate towards the orange guy here, as that color wakes it up. Really needs some weather here! It would be even better in the rain or at least at sunset, maybe with the streetlamp on and adding a glowing effect. Both may make the heart difficult to see, but who knows?



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    Re: Love, passed by.

    haha...really passed

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    Re: Love, passed by.

    I hung around until later (while Angie was shopping) but it got too dark for the G9 to get a picture before it got interesting. Problem here is it has tall buildings on one side and a wall on the other, so there isn't much light here way before the sun sets and the lights come on.
    I@ll experiemtn with different crops.
    I was wondering whether to use all 3 together, or just pick one ?
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